Horrer carnival
Today I am talk about the what I read in the book...
There are two friends pretty and Brad. They go to the horrer carnival. And they are the thinking about the riding in around and around cercle. It is very dangerous for them but they have little bit confidence to do that. They have decided we are ride in the cercle. After that As You are entrance in carnival you Listen the music inside for own enjoyment and remove some fear.
Now Pretty is starting the ride first after pretty ride come back then Brad is go for riding. They legs are swing and tumble down.
Very well elaborated, just you have to write only write the outline.Try to improve on denouement.
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